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Gordon Freeman took my crowbar.

Post by Fniff on Thu Oct 14, 2010 8:29 pm

Dr. Dan ran away from the zombies that used to be his friends. Goddammit, how did it all go so wrong? He was just eating a croissant and drinking coffee, when suddenly zombies, horrible eldritch creatures and all that.

He couldn't handle it. He had to fight back.

He looked around. Dan spotted a crowbar that looked like it was used to try and break open a door. He ripped it out of the door, and fought the zombies.

Dan made a plan. He'd get to a helicopter, order the pilot to get out of the facility while ordering the military to fucking nuke the place as fast as they can, and he'd enjoy tequila and chicks on the ground.

Suddenly, an explosion knocked him out.

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Dr. Gordon Freeman walked over to the crowbar.

"I guess that works" He thought, and grabbed the crowbar and ran.

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Re: Gordon Freeman took my crowbar.

Post by Furburt on Thu Oct 14, 2010 8:45 pm

Dr. Dan?

What a brilliantly cheesy name!

Yes, this is quite entertaining. Sounds like an interesting idea for a series. Seemingly inconsequential videogame characters who alter things beyond measure. They deserve to have their stories told!

Might want to flesh them out a bit more though. Maybe 2 A4 pages each?

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Re: Gordon Freeman took my crowbar.

Post by Fniff on Thu Oct 14, 2010 9:03 pm

Furburt wrote:Dr. Dan?

What a brilliantly cheesy name!

Yes, this is quite entertaining. Sounds like an interesting idea for a series. Seemingly inconsequential videogame characters who alter things beyond measure. They deserve to have their stories told!

Might want to flesh them out a bit more though. Maybe 2 A4 pages each?
Well, basically, I just thought "Who owned that crowbar that Gordon gets?" and then I decided to explain what happened.

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Re: Gordon Freeman took my crowbar.

Post by SnootyJuggaloman on Thu Oct 14, 2010 9:19 pm

Fniff wrote:
Furburt wrote:Dr. Dan?

What a brilliantly cheesy name!

Yes, this is quite entertaining. Sounds like an interesting idea for a series. Seemingly inconsequential videogame characters who alter things beyond measure. They deserve to have their stories told!

Might want to flesh them out a bit more though. Maybe 2 A4 pages each?
Well, basically, I just thought "Who owned that crowbar that Gordon gets?" and then I decided to explain what happened.

A good idea a good story..now where's visuals?

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Re: Gordon Freeman took my crowbar.

Post by Fniff on Thu Oct 14, 2010 9:29 pm

SnootyJuggaloman wrote:
Fniff wrote:
Furburt wrote:Dr. Dan?

What a brilliantly cheesy name!

Yes, this is quite entertaining. Sounds like an interesting idea for a series. Seemingly inconsequential videogame characters who alter things beyond measure. They deserve to have their stories told!

Might want to flesh them out a bit more though. Maybe 2 A4 pages each?
Well, basically, I just thought "Who owned that crowbar that Gordon gets?" and then I decided to explain what happened.

A good idea a good story..now where's visuals?

I ate them, with a side order of pizza.

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