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Re: Slightly less horrible, I think.

Post by Wayward on Tue Mar 01, 2011 11:44 am

It seems more balanced now. Also, that's pencil, right? If you like working with pencil, pick up a knead-able eraser, it will be your best friend.

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Re: Slightly less horrible, I think.

Post by Dead Herald on Tue Mar 01, 2011 12:05 pm

Thanks guys for all the advice.

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Re: Slightly less horrible, I think.

Post by Dead Herald on Tue Mar 01, 2011 11:09 pm

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Dead Herald LXI wrote:Any better now? I think it looks better. Shade lines around the breasts
were thinned out and replaced. Color in the area was lightened slightly
also.
I like what you've done there; that is an improvement. My eye is still drawn to the boobs, though, but maybe that's just me. My fixation with boobs aside, the whole image is very light, mostly due to the white space around her, and your darkest darks are in the chestal area, the necklace and the butterfly in her hair. The contrast draws attention to those things. Not really a crit, just an observation.

Drawing attention to hair clip and necklace was totally intentional. The chest area not so much, but I think I'm happy with the end result.

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Re: Slightly less horrible, I think.

Post by The Moonbai on Wed Mar 02, 2011 12:05 am

ooh can i be reffered to the states of progression? I love progress so~

Also drawing attention to boobage is rather hard not to do for amateurs.. man, woman or machine. I blame society for drawing too much attention to mammaries in the first place... Tho it's not like it looked like you were getting off drawing them so that's grand right?

also glasses S: impossible~ for perspective, how they sit AND still making eyes look grand. You're a braver person to attempt this... But do keep it up... MOAR PROGRESS Very Happy

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Re: Slightly less horrible, I think.

Post by Dead Herald on Wed Mar 02, 2011 3:11 am

I just wanted the image to feel complete. It was an exercise in fap material, there would have been less clothes.

Brave to attempt glasses? Thanks. I'm sure they aren't perfect, but it wouldn't match the goal of the endeavor had I left them out.

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Re: Slightly less horrible, I think.

Post by Dead Herald on Mon May 16, 2011 2:20 pm

Bumped for new touch-ups. Check first post, please.

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Re: Slightly less horrible, I think.

Post by Pararaptor on Mon May 16, 2011 2:28 pm

Might want to soften up the eyebrows a little, & maybe pull back the boxiness of the head.
Nose is too round as well.
I assume you're going for femininity with this, if not disregard all this.

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Re: Slightly less horrible, I think.

Post by MilkyFresh on Mon May 16, 2011 2:30 pm

Me too!
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Re: Slightly less horrible, I think.

Post by Dead Herald on Mon May 16, 2011 2:43 pm

@Para

Uh, I think it might be a little late in the project to fix the head. Also the head shape was intentional, although in retrospect would probably do with being a bit shorter. The eyebrows were also intentional.

Yes, it's supposed to be feminine. But it's also supposed to be representational and the intent with be lost if too many things are changed around.

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Re: Slightly less horrible, I think.

Post by Furburt on Mon May 16, 2011 5:41 pm

@Milky: That will be on an album some day, it must be.

@Herald: New one looks better. More distinct.

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Re: Slightly less horrible, I think.

Post by Dead Herald on Mon May 16, 2011 8:33 pm

Thanks, Furburt.

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Re: Slightly less horrible, I think.

Post by MilkyFresh on Tue May 17, 2011 2:56 am

Thanks, Furburt.

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