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Singing to the air

Post by Guest on Thu Feb 10, 2011 6:40 pm

The despaired one sings to the air, hoping they will see
The despaired one sings to the air, hoping to recieve soothing melodies
One then does find their singing to be in vain
One then turns away, not to sing again

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Post by reg42 on Thu Feb 10, 2011 6:41 pm

I quite like this one

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"Fuck, fuck, fuck/Mutha, mutha fuck/Mutha, mutha fuck fuck/Mutha fuck, mutha fuck/Noinch, noinch, noinch

1-2-1-2-3-4/Noinch, noinch, noinch/Smokin' weed/Smokin' wiz/Doin' coke/Drinkin' beers/Drinkin' beers, beers, beers

Rollin' fatties, smokin' blunts/Who smokes the blunts/We smoke the blunts/Rollin' blunts and smokin...

Oh, let me get a nickle bag

15 bucks little man/Put that shit in my hand/If that money doesn't show/Then you owe me owe me owe

My jungle looooove/Oh-e-oh-e-oh/I think I wanna know ya, know ya"
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Post by GrinningManiac on Sun Feb 13, 2011 1:07 pm

Very open to interpretation. I quite like this one, even if it has a depressing tint to it (which is something I usually avoid...but in this case I like it)

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Post by Wayward on Mon Feb 14, 2011 3:43 am

Keep singing!

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Re: Singing to the air

Post by Guest on Mon Feb 14, 2011 3:49 am

Wayward wrote:Keep singing!
You like my poetry?
I'm not feeling melancholic at the moment so my poetry would be of a different nature if I was to make more.

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Post by Wayward on Mon Feb 14, 2011 4:23 am

I like what I've seen so far, but I haven't read all of the poems you posted, yet. However, whether they're good or not, if you enjoy writing, keep doing it! Write, write, write! (This is coming from someone who has had severe writer's block for over a month.)

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Re: Singing to the air

Post by Guest on Mon Feb 14, 2011 4:32 am

Wayward wrote:I like what I've seen so far, but I haven't read all of the poems you posted, yet. However, whether they're good or not, if you enjoy writing, keep doing it! Write, write, write! (This is coming from someone who has had severe writer's block for over a month.)
Thanks, although I do not feel like conveying anything at the moment .

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